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Sunshine And Blue Sky
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:02:07 AM in AEST
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I thought i'd write some happy, instead of always dark
Of sunshine and blue skies, not just grey and black
Write about good things, to take away the pain
All sadness washed away, by the summer rain
I look up at the clouds and on them wish i was
So inviting and so fluffy, just like candy floss
My mind can go so clear, staring up so high
Staring at the sunshine and at the warm blue sky
Mood swings they just vanish, smiles are all around
Bad thoughts all disappear, as happiness is found
Happiness feels brilliant, I cannot tell a lie
I hope it stays forever, sunshine and blue sky
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parkman
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2004-04-17 03:02:07]
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Re: Sunshine And Blue Sky
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:08:17 AM AEST
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| What a happy poem, sunshine and blue skies always bring a smile to my face :o) |
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Re: Sunshine And Blue Sky
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:11:28 AM AEST
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must confess when that sun comes out i'm a different person.
wildej. |
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Re: Sunshine And Blue Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 01:50:22 PM AEST
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| very uplifting:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sunshine And Blue Sky
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:50:56 PM AEST
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This made me smile, as its currently all blue outside right now. I do admire a poem which can mirror my mood - and I admire this one.
5 stars, for the use of a rhyme which I also admire, and the ease by which you seem to have written this.
Well done. |
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Re: Sunshine And Blue Sky
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by starlight4215 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 10:38:31 AM AEST
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| Sunshine and blue skies. Always and forever. ~ Star x |
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