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blackfoot & gypsy

Contributed by ladyfawn on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

~*Sigsations*~

never shall i see his mezmerizing sweet smile again
alas, entire loving heart memories will always remain,

nor shall i again feel the wind in his hair
ahhhhhhhhhh the two of us were the rare pair,

that appaloosa foal he wanted so to raise or purchase
has long begone galloped through the looking-glass,

after twelve long years i am still quite un-able
to cease love for him; or give our fable label,

full of life & love was my blackfoot husband tormentor
yet in truth i believe his love is & was my dearest center,

why could i not, 'then', admit my whole vision??
vexed was i, to say it; would bring about realism,

in point of fact we lovers were quite parted by fate
truth being; i could not have changed his death date,

for in his heart at that time i wanted not pandemonium
in truth i could not have changed the world's equilibrium,

my gypsy heart now wishes him a blessed day above
for i shall now for-ever-do with-out my greatest love.

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Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:44:41 AM AEST
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"in point of fact we lovers were quite parted by fate..truth being; i could not have changed his death date" Well my dear Lady..we can't change the fate...this is cool yet sadly toches the heart as you wish him a good day above..welldone..lovely read.. venkat

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:02:38 AM AEST
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great poem of a true dedication of love... great write

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:31:30 AM AEST
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PERFECT

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:48:22 AM AEST
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What a romantic yet woeful poem. Lovers parted by cruel fate. You know this would make a great novel. I honestly adore your poetry Ness for you move me every single time. Amazing.

Kie

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:41:28 AM AEST
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Nessa so beautiful
michelle

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramuel on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:56:33 AM AEST
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I like the structure of this poem. Good rhyming, too. Nice work.

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:38:09 PM AEST
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This Is Absolutely Beautiful Nessa
Sad And Very Touching Write Though......
Perfect Dedication Of True Love...
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
*******************************

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:39:41 PM AEST
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Awwww Sweetie...this was very good!!! Really sad, but so well done..... Your love for him lives on thru your words.....
Hugs and woofies...
Jenni

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:20:17 PM AEST
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Awww Nessa, what a beautiful dedication. It touched my heart. *S* Cynthia

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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:30:37 PM AEST
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In one word...Beautiful. *sigh* Enchanting.

Lindsey

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:51:34 PM AEST
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girl this is an awesome write. The graphics are brethe taking.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:46:23 AM AEST
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i believe a love like that knows no bounds........no time........no era......no side........this or the other.........only love......beautiful, as you are......as always.....

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:51:17 PM AEST
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wonderfully poignant and touching write - well done - every word a prayer

hugs
merry

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by Rakerman1999 on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:14:04 AM AEST
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:o( this breaks my heart (((nessa))...I dont know what to say.

Roses
Larry

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by faithmairee on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:11:32 PM AEST
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Nessa-This is truly perfection at it's best! What an awesome poem! You are great!

Hugs-Faith

Re: blackfoot & gypsy (User Rating: 1 )
by Soulless on Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:44:55 PM AEST
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This poem is so beautiful and yet significant. I enjoyed picking out the similes and metaphors of your writing, everytime I read it, I find new thought or ideas buried that i missed before. Wonderful~

Kisses,
~Soulless~

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