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Tangled Web
Contributed by
boricuacd
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 05:25:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Gently she places her hand on his shoulder. Innocently arousing emotions inside of her, and unknowingly, inside of him. The sparks that once ignited their souls in days of old, once again flicker within them. What began inocently has boiled and run over out of control. swirling passions and lieing eyes peering at what are now strangers in their homes. Of magnitudes unheard of since the times of Moses, rechudness exudes. Consuming them? Feelings of unrequited, unreciprocated love, and before them, deadly snares that entrap their minds and lead them to barren wastelands of regret and sorrow. Love forlorn, seeks the devils company and begets transgression that can never be undone, but love cherished blossoms into fields of hope which shroud all blemishes and beautify the soul. The path is set before them, and all is still, as the stage darkens for the final curtain.
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Re: Tangled Web
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by Nelly on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:09:55 AM AEST
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| really cool! is the format really like prose? well, if it is, it still is comprehensible and still the continuity works. good job! |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:21:13 AM AEST
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Absolutely right on the mark with this one, my friend...excellent writing...this is a great poem
Hugs-Faith |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by bernard on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:26:42 AM AEST
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Most unusual form of writing your poem.One word got me though and that was rechudness what does it mean I cannot find it in my trusted dictionary. The writing was good and the message clear. Thanks for a good read
bernard. |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:28:08 AM AEST
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| HOW WONDERFULLY WRITTEN- I ALMOST CRIED. |
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Re: Tangled Web
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by boricuacd on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:02:49 AM AEST
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| Thank you bernard for your help. I completely misspelled wretched. I'm getting it edited as we speak. |
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