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One wish for a love
Contributed by
saveMEfromMYSELF
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:24:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I often think and often cry
For a weary love gone awry
Now he's gone with no goodbye
The one it did want most
My heart I denied, foremost
Now in memory he's just a ghost
Great times wow we did share
Remember lunch when you took my chair
Our odd talks they weren't fair
Not a year has gone past
Since I did see you last
Your image in fields of memories vast
Wishing on what could have been
Only brings to me scared skin
Of which soon I must trade-in
Did you know of what i wish
It would bring great anguish
If we could've been more than flirtatios
On this world you may be
But everyday I do not see
The way you use to look at me
Past events can't change
In present actions, we rearrange
A future that still seems out of range
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Re: One wish for a love
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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| this was a great poem. it really brought up old memories for me too. keep writing- david |
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Re: One wish for a love
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:24:17 AM AEST
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A sad but beautiful poem. I hope ya'll can rekindle or another comes to fill the space.
I'm sure most can relate. so don't discourage
things will turn. |
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Re: One wish for a love
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by Remy on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:05:04 PM AEST
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hum, sounds like someone needs some closure... good writing, thoughs penned down pretty good! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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