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blind love
Contributed by
rightwingbrknwing
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:31:42 AM in AEST
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If love is blind oh how I wish so of she, so that she may look at herself the way she looks to me so that one day she may be happy, and fine which is why we were together, she was never mine, oh why are her eyes so open wide, she shouldnt have to see herself in that light and night after night shed get cut and never bleed refusing to give up her dignity that never came easily, knowledge and strength through pain and that war she should not have fought, strength through the cold nights that her parents brought, never should an angel have to see hells fires never would the most masochistic of things desire strength and knowledge out of the textbook step outside the wall and look at what her pain translated into: made her who she is, I love who she is, if I didnt I would not know anything about the darker side of love right now, how I wish selflessly and selfishly that I could take those nights away and send them to a place where god cannot reach them to add them to his collection of sadistic torment he sends on his flock even the ones who arent black have to watch their ***** backs in 3-D.
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Re: blind love
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by Remy on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 02:19:20 PM AEST
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hmmm... *thinks* watching your back in 3-D sounds tiring! curious write, thou kinda jumbled in one BIG paragraph. i like it... ;0)
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Re: blind love
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by rightwingbrknwing on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:26:28 PM AEST
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| yeah, i know its not formatted none of my poems ever, i just sort of ramble and usually at the end i'm talking about somthing completely different, although i did forget to mention one thing, and that's the whole cut/blood thing i dont think i made that clear enough, a cut is somthing bad that has happened and blood is how much pain you feel...i know its really corney but watever...looking back on this thing i'm so f***ing anoyed i put it up there, its complete s*** and sry. |
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