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The Original Evil
Contributed by
SAT
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:15:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The original evil
feeding off fears
of little kids at night
while lying in their beds
wondering what could be there
something in the closet
waiting to grab them
and pull them in tightly
or under their beds
geting ready to pull them down
and drag them under
to eat their fears
and devour their dreams
their hearts cry out silently
and their hands say invisible things
the sun can't see
til the clouds clear away
and the forcast says rain
for the next lifetime
the moon can't shine
until night does arrive
and sunny it will be for eternity
Copyright ©
SAT
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2004-04-17 11:15:57]
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Re: The Original Evil
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by Ramuel on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:31:52 AM AEST
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Ineresting poem. Pretty good stuff.
-Ramuel |
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Re: The Original Evil
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by Kirby on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 11:46:53 AM AEST
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| This was a very kewl poem. Interesting plot and sequence. Keep em coming and making us woneder. Love:::Kirby |
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Re: The Original Evil
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:04:37 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE THE SMALL KIND OF MADNESS KIDS GO THROUGH WHILE YOUNG! GREAT WRITE THAT DESCRIBES IT PERFECT!!
LOL-DAN!!! |
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