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Suicide
Contributed by
Alli
on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 06:57:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Seems like an answer
Unable to control these feelings
I don't want to live anymore
Can't contain the urge
I'd rather be dead
Don't understand myself
End it all.
2000
Copyright ©
Alli
... [
2004-04-17 18:57:22]
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Re: Suicide
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:09:57 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this one... i luved the creativeness in spelling out suicide.. Its juts wow! awesome job!!!!!!!
keep it up!!;)
~*xObeaOx*~ |
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Re: Suicide
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:21:25 PM AEST
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Clever, but I hope you dont really feel this way.
Lindsey |
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Re: Suicide
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by lexxie on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 09:46:05 PM AEST
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| this poem was awsome i loved it its not like any others that r rymeing and such it just explains wut ur feeling rele well i loved it keep wrighting |
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Re: Suicide
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:01:36 PM AEST
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| Very clever but sad,Christina |
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Re: Suicide
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:40:11 AM AEST
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| Hehe. Clever and powerful. Kudos! I really liked it! |
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Re: Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:03:25 PM AEST
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wow u guys really liekd it?? this page is so currupt.... people come up here writing about how they wanna kill themselves... n then people post baout how good it is n to "keep it up" wtf is worn with u people..... it was a sad poem.... i do hope u dont feel that way tho....
Amanda |
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