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Have Fun Up There
Contributed by
face-in-the-crowd
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Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:46:31 PM in AEST
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Have fun up there, girl
While you're floating on clouds,
Have fun up there, girl
On the streets of gold.
Have fun up there, girl
Singing in the choir,
Have fun up there, girl
Looking down on Earth.
Have fun up there, girl
Living among the stars,
Have fun up there, girl
In my father's house.
I miss you, Tay
And I hope you
Have fun up there, girl.
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Re: Have Fun Up There
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by alasdaircairns on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:01:24 PM AEST
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| This is full of beauty and optimism of our next step after life. A touching dedication. |
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Re: Have Fun Up There
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by emystar on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:01:25 PM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
sorry for your loss but u seem to have peace.
peace, hope, luv, joy,
emy |
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Re: Have Fun Up There
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:24:10 AM AEST
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very heartfelt reminded me how much i miss a friend i lost 3yrs ago. but this was a great poem. so beautiful i cannot describe it as anything else.
love and hugs
XgenX |
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Re: Have Fun Up There
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:34:31 PM AEST
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Beautifully touching......
Hugs
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