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will you
Contributed by
ml03
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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will you give me wings to fly or will you put me in a cage and lock it up
will you give me rainbows and smiles or will you bury me deep in a pit of betrayal and lies
will you give me an open range to run free with the spirit of the wind and the horses or cut me short and fence me in
will you give me anything or everything or leave me poor and begging on the street corner starving begging
for love what will you give me heaven or hell lies or scars what will you give up what will you change so i can be the one will you hold me up and give me a pedestal or leave me dragging behind
up or down right or left here or there me or him will you give me or supress me be my ever waking nightmare every moment there will you give me one moment alone to breathe or will you knock me down cuff me tie me up make me prisioner take away my freedom
so whats it going to be will you give me the freedom i desire the time apart the trust the fun the laughs and love
i need to know what i'm getting into to b/c i don't want to be the bird in the cage or fenced in by you so tell me now if thats how you see it and we can say bye it just won't work then
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Re: will you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:20:54 PM AEST (User
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Wow, original style. And interesting poem! Enjoyed reading it! Great write!
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Re: will you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 05:56:37 AM AEST (User
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Good, emotional write...
Greetz,
Hur |
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