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Some Men
Contributed by
faithmairee
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Signatures By
The Tired Lion
there are some men
i wouldn't give
two cents to meet
they are not the
ones who are don juans
or ones that used to be
they are the men
that want to be
don juans but
know that they are not
i loved a man once
who thought the role
of don juan suited
him just fine who
never intended to
follow through with
any of his smooth moves
so the next time
someone says not to
tell a man how i feel
i'll pay heed to their advice
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2004-04-18 09:25:00]
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Re: Some Men
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by Ramuel on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:45:16 AM AEST
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Hmmm...
This poem is pretty good. I think you could work on the stanza breaks and line breaks a little, but besides that, its pretty good.
I dont want be a Don Juan... I just wanna be a nice guy. :P
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Re: Some Men
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST
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Very good and u r so right. It's really a shame but some r that way.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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