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I truly Love you
Contributed by
Amanda-Ruth
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:35:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sometimes When I look at you,
I feel you don't realise,
Just how much you mean to me,
I can see it in you eyes,
And sometimes when i walk with you,
I wish you'd understand,
Just how much i cherish you,
When we're together, hand in hand,
Its the way you make me feel inside;
the way i've never felt before,
and the way you kiss and hold me near,
leaves me forever wanting more.
The way in which you tilt your head,
In shyness as i stare,
and the way in which you sweetly smile;
when i whisper how much i care
The things you do, the things you say,
the little gifts you give,
It really melts my heart you see,
when you say; without me you couldn't live
The way in which you hold my hand,
so tightly when we're together,
I just hope you believe me when i say;
'i'm going to love you forever'
You call me your 'beautiful lady',
and after all this time, i still blush,
And when you whisper in my ear,
my heart gets such a rush
I find it so sweet, when you call to say,
that you know you'll love me forever,
because it just leaves me waiting for,
the next moment when we are together
You see to love you is to need you,
to cry when you're away,
To have you in my every thoughts,
and to want you more each day
So next time when i should look,
into those baby blue eyes,
my lips will tell you everything,
and my heart will speak no lies,
I want to finish by thanking you,
for this year we've had together,
and i also want to let you know,
'That i'm gonna be your forever'
Copyright ©
Amanda-Ruth
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2004-04-18 09:35:28]
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Re: I truly Love you
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:45:39 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful, written with much love and affection.
well done. |
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Re: I truly Love you
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by shortchics_rock_07 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:22:44 AM AEST
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this is really good...you got a way with words...and i'm glad you guys are still together...he must be really special
~always good luck~ |
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Re: I truly Love you
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by Ali on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:54:38 AM AEST
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| Wow! I'm so jealous. I wish I had that :) |
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Re: I truly Love you
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:22:57 PM AEST
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| this is a sweet poem with beautiful lines...best of luck to you two =P |
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Re: I truly Love you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:56:57 PM AEST
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A Warm Welcome to YPDC...the best poetry site on the net... and with a lovely poem such as this, I'll be looking forward to more of your work....
Jenni |
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