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The pain i feel inside
Contributed by
Amanda-Ruth
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:36:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Please dear God,please take away,
These feelings of worry and pain.
Please let me laugh, share a joke,
And help me to smile again
I know I'm not asking a lot,
And it seems so minor to say,
But if you take this pain away,
I will thank you every day
It started so small,this pain i feel,
So little and easy to bare,
But now it seems to take control,
And it follows me everywhere
I feel so worried and lonely inside,
As if i can't cope alone,
I need you now by my side,
So I never need feel alone
I'm really trying to help myself,
by doing everyday things,
But then why dear God,Why do i fear,
What the next morning brings?
It's a deep down pain, that i feel inside,
A pain that always fails to go,
A pain that hurts my heart and soul,
More than you'll ever know
Please answer my small prayer today,
And please wipe my tears away,
Then i will be forever thanking you,
Much more than i could ever say....
Copyright ©
Amanda-Ruth
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2004-04-18 10:36:35]
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Re: The pain i feel inside
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by Ali on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:47:40 AM AEST
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| I can relate to this, I don't think you can ask someone else to get rid of it, you have to do it yourself for it to go away for good. |
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Re: The pain i feel inside
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:24:46 PM AEST
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Just keep on smiling and keep on writing, this is a very good heartfelt poem i'm sure you've got more to come!
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Re: The pain i feel inside
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:59:44 PM AEST
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Another good write.... the pain you feel was well described.. I hope you find the strength to over come it soon...
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