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A Simple Act of Kindness
Contributed by
brookiecookie02
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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He's not good at sports
She doesn't look good
He's a dork
She doesn't dress the way she should
So we tease and mock
We do it non-stop
We push them around
Till to the ground they drop
They hide in the corner
And silently weep
Every night
They cry themselves to sleep
They have no friends
They didnt stay
They thought they were dorks
So they went away
They've been shoved in lockers
All their life
So they go home
And slit their throat with a knife
A simple act of kindness
Could have helped them through their strife
A simple act of kindness
Could have saved a life
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brookiecookie02
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2004-04-18 11:23:23]
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by Amanda-Ruth on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:28:48 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem-well done, really enjoyable to read-thankyou |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:32:06 AM AEST
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much wisdom in your words...well done
treat others as you would like to be treated...for each person is special in someway
Shari |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:32:15 AM AEST
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true, but 'nothing is this life, comes out as it should'.
good poem. i liked it. |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:51:08 AM AEST
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| Dark yet in a way hopeful. I liked it. I like the aspect of writing style. Very well done. I think things like this, the act of kindness, should happen more often. |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:20:21 PM AEST
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| i agree with Cobalts comment...we all need to show an act of kindness to others more often, great poem ya got here |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by face-in-the-crowd on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:14:24 PM AEST
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| Hey, brookiecookie! I enjoyed this one a lot.....keep 'em coming! : ) |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:28:29 PM AEST
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Very touching...this should not have happened... Good message here....
Jenni |
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Re: A Simple Act of Kindness
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:07:52 AM AEST
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| well written very true:) hugs n' love nessa |
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