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I Lost My Grip
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:25:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I lost my grip
The one that I lack
How could I slip?
Well theres no turning back
I did it again
I knew that I would
Can I please re-begin
Cuz I will if I could
I dont know love
Cuz Im full of *****
But someone above
Means something by it
Let me tell you a story
That isnt a lie
There is just no glory
In the look in their eye
Im a heart breaker
Or kindly, a flirt
A heartless love taker
Who feels worse than dirt
I dont mean to hurt them
As I always do
I never could keep them
Its always been true
And although Im heartless
They tell me Im not
Yet once theyre a witness
Hell should let me rot
Youd never guess how hard
It is to be me
Ive been dealt the wrong hand
The dealer hates me
Ironic but truly
I dealt it myself
My love is unruly
Im building a shelf
And there will I keep it
Thats always my word
But also its bull *****
The worst I have heard
I wish it werent this way
I cant make it quit
My heart does what it may
Get too close, get bit
It can not be tamed
This wild tiger heart
Its prey will be maimed
And thats the worst part
My love is like lightning
It never strikes twice
And it is so frightening
Yet colder than ice
Copyright ©
liquidsunshine
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2004-04-18 11:25:17]
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Re: I Lost My Grip
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:48:53 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem. The title would almost mislead to make one think it was going to be slightly different. I like the flow of the poem and the wording. It rings an aspect of truth and I like that as well. Nicely done. |
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Re: I Lost My Grip
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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This is an honest and excellent write. I know these feelings. Time and God can heal anything. I know that now, but it took forever to learn it. You hang in there liquid, better days are ahead. He has good plans for you.
Love,
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Re: I Lost My Grip
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 12:22:49 PM AEST
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you may be a heartbreaker, but at least your honest! you obviously care to. good work.
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