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Back To The Blood.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm hurting so much!
i'm so bitterly frustrated!
full of iggnorance,
from feeling shot down, and hated!
every drop of love,
is draining out of me.
and every thing is adding up,
back to a life of insecurity!
my listed shadows,
are piling up!
my twisted warmth,
being eaten up!!
i can't describe,
the feeling inside.
but i'll just say,
it won't go away.
that, haunted chambers, make my life!
and my razors in my hand, replacing my knife...
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deathdrop
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2004-04-18 11:28:47]
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Re: Back To The Blood.
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 02:08:56 AM AEST
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| please could some body, comment on this one... even if you think i was wrong to do it. |
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Re: Back To The Blood.
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by LiquidChaos on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:14:27 PM AEST
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nope. you didnt do anything wrong. theres nothing wrong in expressing yourself. sometimes it feels like the only way to feel better is to spill the 'poison' that resides in our veins. but know this--you DO have people you can talk to. even if its online. i'll be here if you need to talk. great write--keep it up!
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