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Over Load!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:47:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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my feelings not normal,
but its not the worst i've had.
its not the worst,
and mixedwith 'sad'.
swirled in with nothing,
chewed by other morbid lives,
coated with stripes of warmth,
half eaten by all my strife.
frustrted by nothing really,
but mixed up, all the same.
hipper, to appeal that i'm OK!
but battling with me,
to become sain!
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deathdrop
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2004-04-18 11:47:41]
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Re: Over Load!
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by dolly_dagger on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:23:03 PM AEST
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wow that was confusing. i think, if i've interpreted correctly, i have felt this way before but havent been able 2 word it, so well done 4 conveying successfully.
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Re: Over Load!
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:54:50 PM AEST
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interesting. i really like this. well written. a very good write well done.
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