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Shimmers
Contributed by
ThePumpkinKing
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 12:30:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Think about you when I'm at home
When I'm feeling all alone
And decidin' the undecided
You make me feel excited
Your voice has a sweet vibration
Fills my mind with elation
But can you hear me now?
I've been empty for awhile
And you're someone,
that can make me smile
When I see your hair that shimmers in the light
My heart starts to fly like a kite
I dream the impossible dream
Love's more than it seems
But can I be a friend?
Could both of our lives blend?
Or am I cursed to be unstable?
And to live in my little fable?
But can you see me now?
I've been lonely for awhile
And you're someone,
that can take away my self-denial
When I see your eyes that shimmer in my mind
I get filled with something time after time
Copyright ©
ThePumpkinKing
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2004-04-18 12:30:32]
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Re: Shimmers
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:16:40 PM AEST
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A beautifil write very well done.
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Re: Shimmers
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:31:01 PM AEST
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sounds like a thoughtful blues song, i like it... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Shimmers
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM AEST
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Wow awesome poem! Hmm can feel longing in it, am I wrong? Awesome write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Shimmers
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:37:47 PM AEST
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This Is A Beautiful Poem :-) Written Very Well
It Was An Enjoyable Read ....Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL******
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Re: Shimmers
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:40:04 PM AEST
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absolutely beautifully written, very loving, one of your sweetest best! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Shimmers
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:56:42 PM AEST
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*Sighs wistfully*
I remember those days, those feelings. I miss them yet i'm not sure that I want them again.
Excellent poem ((5)) all the way.
Kie |
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