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Final Farewell
Contributed by
Chris17
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I do is think about
All the things Ive done for you
I never once turned my back,
Even when people told me to.
You were always there for me,
Through good times and bad,
You were even there
When someone made me sad.
Now that I need some comfort
And someones hand to hold,
Will it be you whos there for me
As my life unfolds.
Im not sure if I can count on you,
To actually be there for me
Because of what happened before
When you needed to be free.
How could you just do this,
Hurt me in such away
Leave me here thinking
Of something brave to say.
Im not sure if well ever be friends
No one can really tell
All I know right now is
This isnt our final farewell
Copyright ©
Chris17
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2004-04-18 13:43:13]
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Re: Final Farewell
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by Amanda-Ruth on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:52:44 PM AEST
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Well done chris-this is beautiful.i got a shiver when i read it if you know what i mean?
Thankyou,
Amanda x |
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Re: Final Farewell
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:53:56 PM AEST
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i can really relate to this poem..
Xcellent write!
*~xObeaOx~* |
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Re: Final Farewell
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:06:33 PM AEST
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oh wow... reads like a hidden journal entry i've jubled out a long while ago, good write... heartfelt and loving, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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