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Bleeding Painting
Contributed by
creed
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:00:38 PM in AEST
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It's so strange
So stupid
A world now painted in blood for me
A painful amusement
Life is fading away
My soul is dying
Pressing the blade into my skin
I cant even feel it, oh well
I promise you now, I'll stop hurting myself
I promise you now, I wont do anything stupid
I promise you now, I wont ever leave you
I'll stop what I'm doing
Show everyone who I really am
Influence others to be better people
I'll make you more happy
When you come back
I'll change everything just for you
I'll be their when your plane lands
I could never leave you
So I'll stand here waiting
waiting just for you
Copyright ©
creed
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2004-04-18 15:00:38]
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Re: Bleeding Painting
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by Remy on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:43:53 PM AEST
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hope the wait isn't everlasting, cuz i've been waiting as well for quite awhile... good writing, good good good... ;0)
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Re: Bleeding Painting
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by creed on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:33:37 PM AEST
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| i hope the wait isnt everlasting either. hopefully it wont be. |
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Re: Bleeding Painting
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by TaintedOptomist on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:36:35 AM AEST
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long.....time......no bueno....
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