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Shadowed
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:58:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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For where the sunburnt winds
Touch on my face,caress my hair
I close my eyes,walk through dreams
Heart in hand,a shadowed lair
Recalling a soothing voice,
Mellowing a lost souls pain
Wading through whats born of fear
Only tears to taste,remain
A passing moment makes for a day
Sleepless nights,eternity's dance
No direction,lost without you
Heart,raw and heavy in my hands
This world,she wants a battle
Seeks to feed upon my bones
A tiny morsel upon her plate
I'm stripped bare and die alone
I have called to you in darkness
By light of day,your song I sing
But no more do you walk with me
This fate,a deadly sting
Still I soften at the thought of you
A smile paints my tear stained face
I close my eyes,return to dreams
Where loving you,is my only place
And so the shadowed lair
Becomes a home,a place to grieve
As somewhere in the darkness
Grim reality takes leave
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2004-04-18 19:58:13]
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Re: Shadowed
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:20:04 PM AEST
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I am in awe this poem is incredibly beautiful.
It flows like silk.
A masterpiece.
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Re: Shadowed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:01:27 PM AEST
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So good to see you posting again, Whispers... Missed your beautiful words..
Hope all is well with you...
Hugs
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Re: Shadowed
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:53:47 PM AEST
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Sad but written well. I'm happy to know it's an old one.
luv, huggs, peace, hope,
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Re: Shadowed
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:52:52 PM AEST
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yay!!!!!!!! your back! i loved this poem wow i never thought dark poetry could be written as beautifully and poetically as u have portrayed... this was a masterpeice and I salute thee.I tried to pick out a favourite line, but honestly i loved the whole darn poem.
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Re: Shadowed
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:18:24 AM AEST
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good to see you this is so melancholy but flowing and lovely at the same time
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Re: Shadowed
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:08:35 AM AEST
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Penned with the beauty that only a chosen few will ever attain. A heart with a pen attached ;o)
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Re: Shadowed
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by parkman on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:03:40 PM AEST
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| lovely flowing write and such a beautiful piece |
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Re: Shadowed
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:31:47 PM AEST
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im speechless.... WOW lol
i loved this! just so dark and beautiful. i was blown away. wonderfully done.
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Re: Shadowed
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:22:41 PM AEST
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you have a beautiful way with words very well written.
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