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lill miss cynical
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 09:58:32 PM in AEST
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granted, it is a small town
that brings to her brow a frown
she's creative and to them, unusual
it is not easy to be different
in a world of backwards people
who make harsh judgements
quickly; so she has come to be
quite strange; oh, let her be
she does not care anymore
once she let go a cry, not one of
them would wipe her eye they have
blown their chances as wind blows branches
their words and tongue
spew poison like arsenic wine
slow faults that kill love like a shadow
her auburn hair lays on high cheek
-bones of indian heritage the proud
ones, at the breeze she laughs aloud
her mind goes where it will
whilst moonshine is their thrill
not as fun, mayhap their lives are
for beautiful she shines as a star
brilliant and rare as snow in rain
they will never know her pain
they are too shallow
by far.
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Angelic_Demon on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:02:07 PM AEST
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Ha! I love it mom! :D
Great write...
*big hugs*
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:06:01 PM AEST
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Wow Nessa, that had so much depth and its was purely beautiful. Wonderful write.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:20:42 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write hun- truly beautiful as are your children and yourself.
Hugs 'n Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:32:19 PM AEST
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Outstanding Nessa. Good for her. Tell her to cherish her difference from them. Never let her fall into the same deary life as their narrowness consumes. Life is too full and wonderful to live like that. Magnificence at it best.
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Kie on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:33:30 PM AEST
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We are in the same mind frame.
She sounds beautiful and people can be biased and closed minded.
This was so lovely to write for your daughter.
Kie |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:36:09 PM AEST
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Awesome write Ness..... I love it.....pic is beautiful also.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:49:44 PM AEST
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DEEP & A GREAT WRITE! TO BAD THE WORLD IS SO BLIND TO PEOPLES FEELINGS!! GREAT POEM!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by venkat on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:19:15 AM AEST
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"their words and tongue
spew poison like arsenic wine
slow faults that kill love like a shadow"
people are merciless..awesome write..beautifully done..loved this Nessa.
huggies:-) venkat
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:17:15 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and tell her to be the person she is different is always better for if we all conformed into the person everyone thought we should be we would lose something very important our ultimate self!!
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:29:00 AM AEST
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This is AWESOME!! Sometimes I wish I had the sort of mother who'd write a poem like this about me. You two are so lucky to have each other, and if I were Mara, I'd be extremely proud to have this written about me. Absolutely beautiful.
~ Moonlit |
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by spooky on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:44:48 AM AEST
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| well written,,with heart,, a friend in words,,spooky |
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:50:25 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this is such a beautiful, loving write to your daughter. :o) I loved it dearly. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by parkman on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:18:00 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and deep, a pleasure to read |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Merry on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:07:56 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem about a beautiful young lady - you are both very dear to me
love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:26:29 PM AEST
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Wow! What can I say! I think you are deserving of a standing ovation on this one!
Lucky girl.....beautiful mom! What a team!
{{{{{Nessa}}}}}}}}
Angel always...Joni 0:-) |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:36:52 PM AEST
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Nessa This Is So Beautiful I Love It !!!!!!
An Awesome Write To Your Daughter...
Keep Em Coming :-) I Enjoyed Reading It Very Much..
******LoVe**AnGeL******
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:06:21 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ness, but I cannot in good conscience give you all the credit for it as the young lady you wrote it for is so charming, beautiful and intelligent that it would have been impossible to write of her without it being a masterpiece.
(((( for both of ya))))
Roses @---->---
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:43:01 PM AEST
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a beautiful and loving write. the picture was really cool. i enjoyed this. well done.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:41:55 AM AEST
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another beautiful write.
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:19:42 AM AEST
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What a strong and tragic woman! Very good write.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by silent on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:29:35 PM AEST
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Well that did it for me again, what a creative and inspiring writer you are.
Best wishes,
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Re: lill miss cynical
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 5th November 2014 @ 06:22:20 PM AEST
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A Mother's love is so precious, (or it should be). It sounds like you are a devoted and protective parent. Your daughter has already won half the battle...in short order those others won't matter.
You wrote this really well.
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