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Hal
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:43:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm so tired...
Tears staining my cheeks
Blurred eyes
I remember
A time, I always saw you
You were always standing in church
I always looked forward
To see your smiling face
To hear your comforting voice
Now you're gone
No more than a forgotten memory to some
My own mother, claiming to not remember
I know know where you are...
Looking down at us from heaven
We'll take care of them for you
Never let them come to harm...
I'll never forget you Hal
You were a good man
A caring man
Most importantly
A family man
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2004-04-18 22:43:26]
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Re: Hal
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:52:01 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry for your loss. I know how difficult it is to go on when you lose someone you respect and care for so much. It is a heavy load to carry in your heart. But he is with you everyday and never forget that there are just some special people in this world and appreciate them while you have them. Best wishes to you in the future.
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Re: Hal
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:03:55 PM AEST
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Touching and really sad... My heart goes out to you and your family.... Hang on to the memories....
Jenni |
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Re: Hal
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 10:42:43 PM AEST
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| I hate to lose loved ones...it is never easy. Glad you could share this touching piece with me. |
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Re: Hal
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by faithmairee on
Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 05:31:47 AM AEST
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| a beautiful and moving tribute to a loved one...May God bless..Faith |
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