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Fools Angel
Contributed by
Soulrebel973
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Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:53:07 PM in AEST
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I got an angel watching over me,
holding me balanced,
keepin the snakes venom outta me,
sittin in silence,
she loves and hates me for the way that im steppin,
She witnessed mad ounces,crack houses,
pain, love, hate, and affection,
she tries to see the better side a' me,
diggin deep inside of me,
But the world is good and evil and i feel that still inside of me..
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Soulrebel973
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2004-04-18 22:53:07]
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Re: Fools Angel
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:03:43 PM AEST
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This is a good write. Maybe that angel will keep digging deep enough to be able to pick all the evil out and let the good flow. It makes life so much easier to live and digest.
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Re: Fools Angel
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by Spike on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:20:42 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed the raw expression and the tough handling of the inner struggle we all feel at some time, and on some level. Strong, unpretentious, mature. Worth rapping, if you haven't done it already.
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