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** Voices In The Night **
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:33:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Up and down the hallways the dead drag their rusty chains behind them, there are ghosts in our midst, the voices in the night scream out in pain.
The pain from the past tries to reach out from beynd the grave, the walls bleed, the anger within the ghosts is truly unbelieveable.
The torture these restless souls must have went through, being chained to walls and beaten to death, being murdered in the darkest of night.
Voices in the night cry out in pain, the smell of rotten flesh lingers in the air.
The smell of death resides within the castle walls, it makes the stomach churn.
They moan, they cry, they scream, while their lives are being stolen from them.
Copyright Cynthia Jones Apr.15/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-04-19 05:33:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:37:25 AM AEST (User
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just glad i wasn't reading this last thing at night, good write.
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:38:31 AM AEST (User
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wow..this very dark..spine chilling..beautiful write. venkat |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by mountainhigh on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:57:23 AM AEST (User
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Like listening to the wind, on the windswept battleground. Great poem, I enjoyed it much, thank you. |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:59:56 AM AEST (User
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Chilling write!! I'm with Johnny on this one....
Jenni |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:28:05 AM AEST (User
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i like this, very chilling and dark. i agree with the others im glad i didnt read this last night. greta write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:21:13 AM AEST (User
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Dark and creepy! You Cynthia have a great imagination and talent!
Kie |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:10:23 AM AEST (User
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oh girl this rocks!
so dark and chilling. just amazing. i loved this. well done.
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by parkman on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:42:11 AM AEST (User
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dark and chilling, excellent write, loved the last 2 lines |
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Re: ** Voices In The Night **
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 05:07:11 AM AEST (User
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chillsssss goooood one |
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