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Faceless
Contributed by
Hugh
on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:55:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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A breaking heart
A fighting soul
A life falling apart
Its lost sight of its goal
Somewhere in the speed
The rush of things
Lost in lifes greed
Lost what life really means
This soul is bound
And so it will stay
Until a reason is found
To continue on its way
A new love, an old hate
This soul is lost, it will not last
It is its fate
To run from its past
Stuck in this place
For an eternity
Without a face
Forever it will be
Copyright ©
Hugh
... [
2004-04-19 10:55:41]
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Re: Faceless
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by kandis on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:03:59 AM AEST
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| This makes me feel very sad. Well written. |
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Re: Faceless
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by starlight4215 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:08:51 AM AEST
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| We all need to stand back and take a good look at times. Thought provoking and well written piece. ~ Star |
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Re: Faceless
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:46:09 AM AEST
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well done! it's good, but also because weird, you've written about my life. i wish i could express my feelings as well as you.
i need to vent some pain and anger, and i don't know how to let it out!
from ~deathdrop~ |
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Re: Faceless
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by kori31 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:50:43 PM AEST
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| damn I know how you feel- great write |
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