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frozen love
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:49:38 PM in AEST
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pretty eyes...
frozen tears of sorrow,
icicles freeze upon your cheeks,
as water turns to ice at the touch of your skin.
cold, so cold,
i shiver at your touch...
wonderous beauty,
an ice statue,
carved in such delicate malice,
your features glisten with frozen hatred,
i want to keep you forever..
frozen beauty..
but you melt with the warmth of my love...
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Re: frozen love
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by eternallyloved on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 04:53:22 PM AEST
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| very beautifully written. I quite enjoyed reading that. I am very impressed. Keep it up. I look foward to reading more. |
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Re: frozen love
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:26:00 PM AEST
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Wow... this is awesome!
"but you melt with the warmth of my love..."
sweet....
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Re: frozen love
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by patar420 on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 05:43:41 PM AEST
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| wow, i really like it....i wish i could rite like that. keep on truckin, lol. |
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Re: frozen love
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by ThicKnesS on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:19:52 PM AEST
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| first word that comes to mind....."sweet". it the kind of poem that make the broken hearted want to try love again. |
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Re: frozen love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:33:46 PM AEST
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Vivid imagery...gentle flow.....ahhhhh the thrill of love and beauty!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: frozen love
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by Stitch on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:14:19 PM AEST
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You are on another roll girl. Really good stuff here. Really good. Insightful and intriguing.
Stitch |
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Re: frozen love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:14:12 PM AEST
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Aww wow, this is breathtaking. Great write here I truly loved it.
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: frozen love
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by blueheart on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:37:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow of words. :)
Liked it a lot. |
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Re: frozen love
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:13:57 AM AEST
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I thought the imagery was excellent in your poem. I really liked this one.
Kie |
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Re: frozen love
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:30:28 PM AEST
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wow, this poem is so sweet, and beautiful and...wow!
(I have bronchitis) |
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Re: frozen love
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:51:23 AM AEST
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| Can I just tell you how very awed I am by your talent? I love everything about this poem from the icy misty atmosphere to the simple but very effective imagery. Well done. |
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Re: frozen love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 12:32:15 PM AEST
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exquisitly beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa
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