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No God
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:47:41 PM in AEST
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No God I could worship-
Could allow a child to go beaten and alone
No God I could worship-
Could allow a piece of me to die every night
No God I could worship-
Could allow my pillow to stay soaked
No God I could worship-
Could allow my life to lose all hope
No God I could worship-
Could sit back and watch me pray
No God I could worship-
Would allow people to be murdered every day
No God I could worship-
Could leave the lights off in my life
No God I could worship-
Would allow such blatant unjustifiable strife
The God I would pray to-
Would have to make a paradise
The God I would pray to-
Would enrich each and every painful life
The God I would pray to-
Would hold out a hand and help me up
The God I would pray to-
Wouldn't allow killers to roam free
The God I would pray to-
He'd truely show that he loved you and me
The God in your life has never-
Been honest or kind
The God you pray to every night-
Is a figment in your mind.
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Re: No God
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:27:36 PM AEST
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This is brilliant and I totally agree with every word said here. I constantly think these things and you have penned them perfectly.
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Re: No God
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by discantbelife on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 09:42:49 PM AEST
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| im extremely confused with this poem are u saying that there is not God because these things happen im just trying to get the whole picture. I hope not because their is a God who love us more than anything. |
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Re: No God
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:55:57 AM AEST
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Amen to thee (lol) i also agree with every word written here, especially the last sentence
'The God you pray to every night-
Is a figment in your mind.'
Another captivating write, i love the message, screams to me in a blaze of excellence, if anyone doesnt agree with this 'looks up' then in the words of a great man
'smite me, almighty smiter!!!!'
luv, hugs, sandy beaches and squishy bugs
Luke |
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Re: No God
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by Hanno on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:00:36 AM AEST
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Yeaahhhhh,lets blame God,for Pol Pot,Adolf Hitler,mafia, the murders done by countries in the name of the empire,england has got to be the worst......
Why should we believe there is a God because humans are greedy,deceitful and murderers.Lets blame the God who said 'love thine enemies...and 'thou shalt not kill'.DON'T ever blame a human for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My daughter died of Leukaemia at the age of 15 but she left a wonderful legacy for those who don't go through life with blinkers on. |
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Re: No God
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:37:09 AM AEST
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Brilliant! I am sitting here in awe and wondering how do I summarize a great poem accurately? Your poem just blew me away. One of your best for sure this one is. You made some valid points in my opinion. That is the great thing about poetry we can write what we want and not everyone has to agree but it still makes for great poetry. 5 stars for this one..
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Re: No God
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:27:13 PM AEST
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good poem although I don't wholly agree with you I'm not going to guilt trip you because that's you believe and I respect that and have said some of the same things in my life before.
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Re: No God
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by silent on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:18:21 AM AEST
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Very well written Lindsey. It's a very sad world.
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