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The Protaginist (His last peformance)
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:22:22 PM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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He takes and he falls.
Trying so hard to be sober.
His old and wittled bones arent the same.
He isnt what he use to be.
We all think he is living.
Dying to live to die another day.
He takes things the wrong way.
Lets his fears and beliefs climax above his head.
In never being able to reach them in his grasp again.
Ready to perform on this stage.
His life is his own, one stage.
One last show one last time.
Only to hear the harsh tone of the silent.
Weak and powerless he breathes.
His last act is about to begin.
The curtain falls and so does he.
His corpse lying limp and shaded.
Could this be, his last act.
The burnout of a star.
With the crowds applause the curtain closes.
The man stands up and wipes his dusty suite.
Begins a new tour with many other days on the road.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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Re: The Protaginist (His last peformance)
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:13:54 PM AEST
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awesome write. well written. i really enjoyed it. great poem keep up the amazing work.
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Re: The Protaginist (His last peformance)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:15:48 PM AEST
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This is great, I really enjoyed. Brilliant write.
Hugs 'n Love
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Re: The Protaginist (His last peformance)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:58:04 PM AEST
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| good and dark. you've got real talent. |
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