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Helplessly Taken
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 10:18:32 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Helplessly Taken Taken by the sun Moved by the wind element Is helpless water
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2004-04-19 22:18:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Helplessly Taken
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 11:18:06 PM AEST (User
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This is really good, good imagery! Great job |
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Re: Helplessly Taken
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 01:08:04 PM AEST (User
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It's amazing how you can put down three lines and it creates a whole story and imagery in my head!
Wonderful Jenifer!! |
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