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Please for me
Contributed by
little_genna
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:16:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You say you love me,
We cannot be.
My feelings are not the same.
I cannot be blamed.
Youre the one that left.
All I wanted was death.
Give me a break.
I need to sit and think by the lake.
I cannot share my thoughts and feelings
You were never very good at dealing.
My love turned to hate.
No we cannot have a debate.
Just deal with it.
My heart is not lit.
Give it a rest,
After all its for the best.
If we stay this way.
It will turn into a fray.
You always make my temper flair.
No one has managed to compare.
Sorry my feelings are just not there.
So dont you dare.
Stay away in that way.
Just please for me
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Re: Please for me
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:50:37 AM AEST
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This is good! i really like this part:
My heart is not lit.
Give it a rest,
After all its for the best.
If we stay this way
I hope all goes well for you! Great peice of work! |
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Re: Please for me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:02:28 AM AEST
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Very good writing. U go now!
Very strong write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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