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Waiting
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:06:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sitting alone in this dying room,
Trapped alone in this human form,
I guess death will come soon,
I guess I could wait a bit longer,
But as I wait my will becomes stronger,
Why should I live in this dying world,
A parasite with an unrelenting hunger,
To sub-consciensly consume this land,
A built in command that I cant understand
So I sit here waiting,
For fate to lay hands upon me.
Sit here breath bated,
Just to be set free.
To enter pure darkness,
Pure non-existance,
Because there is no heaven and hell
What I look forward to is;
Nothing
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2004-04-20 08:06:06]
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Re: Waiting
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:18:21 AM AEST
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| great poem. last three lines are really great. |
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Re: Waiting
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:27:53 AM AEST
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Too right.. i completely agree with the end and can relate to this.. very good poem..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Waiting
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:43:33 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem with some really dark imagery. i really enjoyed reading it. -david |
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Re: Waiting
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:43:51 PM AEST
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waiting for nothing, not a concept i'd like to think upon at this moment - yet still, i know will eventually. intersting write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Waiting
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by arden on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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a very deep and dark write. so well written. awesome work. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Waiting
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:05:02 PM AEST
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| great write. very powerful, especially the last few lines. I enjoyed reading this and I hope to read more from you soon :) |
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