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THE REBIRTH OF GWENDOLYN
Contributed by
GODSBESTIMAGE
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:39:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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The moment she were born A little girl called GWENDOLYN Wants to know about God Is he real or is he not? She gets on her knees to pray She hears a deep voice God is real and he knows her name He said he was with her along As she continues to pray A warm feeling overcomes her It flows into her heart Into her mind And into her soul God is now in control She sees burst of colorful lights push push!!! She is born again
Gwendolyn M Barden
Copyright ?2004 Gwendolyn M. Barden
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2004-04-20 08:39:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: THE REBIRTH OF GWENDOLYN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:28:20 AM AEST (User
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The most wonderful feeling in the world! I really liked this. Took me back to my own rebirth.
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Re: THE REBIRTH OF GWENDOLYN
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:37:37 PM AEST (User
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beautiful imagery, lovely concept... amidst the corny push push line, i find myself liking this write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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