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I need a drink
Contributed by
Matsukaze
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:19:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I need a drink, just to help me relax
Just one more, just to help the time pass
But as I slowly slip into the abyss
Of beer and whiskey, the two I would mix
I would realize, that in the morning next
I would not feel so good, nor could I read the newspapers text
Time for coffee, and a cigarette
Dark shades for my eyes, that morning light hurts, you bet....!!!
I'd have to say that I've learned my lesson
Too many days of alcohol, leaving it's after impression
I' think with coffee and and a chew of Copenhagen, that I will stick
....Atleast it doesnt make me sick..............
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Re: I need a drink
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:09:00 AM AEST
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| this is sad but i just feel like i know your strong your poem also hints a humourour side to it? i feel abit guilty saying this but i really did love your poem even although its about a not so happy topic but you just keep fighting your doing great! |
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Re: I need a drink
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:20:00 PM AEST
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heh, one day at a time... it's a good way to progress sometimes... good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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