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Till Love Started to Hurt
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:38:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im sick and tired Of standing in this spot Clinging to the edge Looking over the brink Feeling the things That haunt my dreams Tortured by thoughts That I so often think That everything I ever wanted Is just beyond my reach Like a mirage It was waved and flaunted Right in front of my eyes So I bent down to drink Savoring the moment Hoping itd last Feeling relief and joy But in the end Getting my spirit dashed And crushed on the shore As reality crashes in My hearts had it It cant take anymore How am I supposed to care But only halfway How am I supposed to trace the image But not connect the dots How am I supposed to play the role But never get the part How am I supposed to utter fears I cant even say How am I supposed to tear apart My body and my soul And convince my mind Not to follow my heart Will I ever heal And one day be whole Will I ever learn To love some more Id never done it before Ill never do it again Ill never open up my heart And show someone The terror within Cause I lost my will to live My will to love My will to give And I lost my will to take part In this push and shove I lost my will to be who I am And change who I was I lost my will to walk My will to care And my will to talk Thats why Im sitting here Dwelling in the torment Of heartbreak And its never-ending wake Its caused me To lose my will to hope Thats why I grope For a way out of this But this is my fate Sealed with a kiss From Venus lips Oh how sweet it was Till I realized the curse Oh how sweet it was Till love started to hurt
Wayne Wende
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Re: Till Love Started to Hurt
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:12:22 AM AEST (User
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Yes, when the end comes, love does hurt. I know I will try love again if it comes my way, but I will certainly be more cautious of opening my heart. This is a write I could truly feel. Keep penning, Wayne.
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Re: Till Love Started to Hurt
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:06:47 PM AEST (User
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oh wow... i can feel the flooding of haunting thoughts rushing in! great write... ;0)
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Re: Till Love Started to Hurt
(User Rating: 1 ) by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:27:18 AM AEST (User
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wow you took the words out of my mouth! what a great poem you got here. How am I supposed to play the role,But never get the part.. this line is me all the way. |
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