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The Love Of My Life
Contributed by
Alli
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 10:48:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
FathersDayPoems
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Love always finds its way into the deepest crevices of my soul
The pain rides shotgun with the pleasure it brings
And my heart aches with joy
He was the greatest love of my life
A shoulder to cry on
To hear his voice for one second, I would give up my eternity
He stood like a valiant soldier
He was my hero
I looked up to him, and I wanted to be just like him
My little mind became a utopia of thoughts, of never parting
Losing him destroyed me
My heart burns with the memory of our love
I saw in his eyes the immense pride he felt for me
And I only wish I could look into those eyes again
I fear I'm forgetting the details of him
His laugh, touch, voice, scent
Like a fading memory, my tears fall away
And blend into an abyss hidden deep inside my heart
My lonely heart, no other could ever fill the void he has left
I miss him so much
I love him
My father, my protector, my love.
2003
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Alli
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2004-04-20 10:48:24]
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Re: The Love Of My Life
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by amalyna on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:36:20 AM AEST
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that's so sad, but so sweet...
great write! |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:04:00 PM AEST
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*smiles* nice to recall in good memory of a far gone loved one... good poetry, quite good. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:38:54 PM AEST
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| beautiful but sad, big hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Love Of My Life
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by eternallyloved on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:20:22 AM AEST
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Sorry you had to endure this. I too have lost people i love and know how you feel. Stay strong. I was quite impressed withyour work. Keep it up.
God Bless
~Shayna |
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