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forever
Contributed by
loopylou
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:01:26 AM in AEST
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I'll love you forever
and a millon days
your the only person who makes me feel this way
your the only person i'll kiss goodnight
if i lose you forever tears i will cry
because you're so special
i love you so much it's incredible
and when i fall asleep at night
wherever you are
i think of you and i know you're not that far
i'll dream a dream prepared to never wake up
just as long as i'm with you i'll ask this much
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Re: forever
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by Amanda-Ruth on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:06:22 AM AEST
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Lovely Looplou!-well done.
I can realte to these 'wild' feelings, when you think so much of someone, you're prepared to do Almost anything for them.
I totally understand what you're saying in this write.
Its brilliant,
Thankyou,
Amanda x |
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Re: forever
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 11:33:03 AM AEST
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You tell your poem in a straight forward way. It is clear and the meaning is for all to see. Thanks for a very good read.
bernard |
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Re: forever
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:13:47 PM AEST
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This was so genuine and from the heart. I really liked this poem of love.
Kie |
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Re: forever
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:43:00 PM AEST
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| this is super good and its great cause i feel like that about my boyfriend and you put it in great words |
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Re: forever
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:38:26 PM AEST
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| very sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:53:24 AM AEST
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| Hey lou tis me ben, poem about me??? anyhoo if it aint i still love it, well done, i hought you stopped writing poems?? obviously not lol well done XxXxXlots of loveXxXxXBenXxXxXxX |
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Re: forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:55:29 AM AEST
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| hope this puts a rating^^^^^ XxX Love Ben XxX |
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