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Broken Glass
Contributed by
Stormydwn
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:44:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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All I wanted was everything
in You.
All I wanted was real
in Us.
Broken glass memories
Pieces left to cut me.
What once was beauty
Draws blood so precise.
Knowing the pieces cut,
Still, I pick them up.
Needing to hold on
To any shards remaining.
Penetrating so deeply,
The pain, surprising.
Beauty replaced forever.
Daggers, every one.
Copyright ©
Stormydwn
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2004-04-20 15:44:55]
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Re: Broken Glass
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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This is a great poem! This part i loved:
Broken glass memories
Pieces left to cut me.
What once was beauty
Draws blood so precise |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 03:49:06 PM AEST
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oww... glass cuts hurt buddy! okay okay, i'll stick with the darkness theme - "oo, dark and haunting, romantic type of writing... bueno!" there, happy?!? lol, oh wow, decaff decaff decaff!! good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:55:20 PM AEST
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| Loved the way it was short but says more than is written. Very nice. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:53:15 PM AEST
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Quite deep and incisive, this write. I like the analogies used.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:12:54 PM AEST
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welcome to ypdc this is incredible ill await more
michelle |
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Re: Broken Glass
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 5th November 2004 @ 04:01:16 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!!! |
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