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the execution
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 07:20:00 AM in AEST
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The Execution
Ivan 18 years old a Russian soldier born in the ugly suburbs of Moscow now captured by Chechen rebels, was told to bend down on his knees and the cold muzzle of a pistol was pressed at the back of his head. He was paralysed and voices of the rebels sounded as they were talking through cotton wool, warm pee ran down his thighs. The pressure eased and a voice said that they were not going to kill him after all. Life surged through Ivans veins and suddenly he felt ashamed that he had peed on himself, as hope blossomed and Ivan smiled they shot him dead, threw his warm body down a latrine ditch; brutalised laughter and cigarette smoke. When Russian soldiers found Ivan they swore to do the same and worse to the rebels and so wars go on one grotesque act more senseless than the other, till the enemy is dehumanised, vermin that deserves to die. Compassion, this costly gift is only reserved for fellow soldiers in the platoon.
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Re: the execution
(User Rating: 1 ) by Moca on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:14:59 AM AEST (User
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Raw, cold, violent picture you paint with the reality of what an execution would be- running through the minds of all involved. Interesting... I can almost feel the cold winter. |
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