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Circles
Contributed by
olive
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:59:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You,
like us all,
come in circles.
Slipping on the curving edge
of your life
you find a bit of yourself
and so quickly
keep rounding....
the excitement of the edge
becoming too much, too much
and somewhere soon
you lose that part you had found.
Because
that's where we are.
And we all come in circles.
So....
We're so often gone
far, far away from ourselves.
Just as we want to reach back,
we come to the same curve again
and we forget what it felt like
and where we've been.
Copyright ©
olive
... [
2004-04-21 00:59:13]
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Re: Circles
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by eternallyloved on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:02:46 AM AEST
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Deep. Truely an intriguing write.
I enjoyed It. Keep up the impressive work.
God Bless,
~Shayna
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Re: Circles
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:57:07 AM AEST
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| This is really good! You are great! |
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Re: Circles
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:49:01 PM AEST
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| excelente. interesante. verdad. and if you like english better tahn spanish i just said excellent, interesting, and true. |
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