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On A Full Moon
Contributed by
Rylo
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:09:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The moon is now full
And the blood that I smell is new
As I stare from my grave
It is you that I crave
For it is your soul I must claim, and your blood I must drink
For your soul shall slip inside of me, and in darkness
You shall live for all eternity
I will come down upon you like a ton of bricks
Then leave your body to fall, as your blood drips
You will then come to me before sunrise
And stare into my dark and evil eyes
We shall then share my grave together
For it doesn't get any better
A mistress you are, a king I am
A queen you could be, if you take my hand
We shall then roam the land
And take life after life, and blood for blood
Until our clan is grand
The ground will covered, with blood
And bodies all around
People from far and near, will take this vow
For they will have no choice
This is our land now.
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Rylo
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:14:57 AM AEST
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ok now Im not so sad thanks Ron!!
now I can get scared instead???
this is great
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:19:12 AM AEST
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you have a way with the dark writes
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:25:56 AM AEST
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As I said before, don't do vampires but u do certainly have a way with these writes......
luv, huggs, oooooouuuuu,
emy |
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by Thivanka on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:41:00 AM AEST
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This is really good. The rhyming was well done, perfectly written verse.
-Thivanka |
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:46:40 AM AEST
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| Well done! Kinda scary but good! |
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:50:37 AM AEST
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now that was dark! well done.
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by paper-heart-hero on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:51:49 AM AEST
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| i love it when someone can write a great poem about werewolves or vampires. and this was a great poem. i have a song i wrote called born in the dark about the darker side of being turned. the movies make everything so beautiful but its not. you might like it. ~James |
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 05:22:44 AM AEST
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| what are you wearing lol jk (JUST KIDDING) good write.... |
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Re: On A Full Moon
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:14:10 AM AEST
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| ooooo! |
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