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pleasurable vengance
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 03:54:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The coldness is closing around me
Capturing my body and my soul
Losing total control over the world
Not knowing whether to free my hold
The distance grows as pain increases
The want of pleasure, the need of vengence
You'd never know that you ended me
The constant struggle to find the path
To escape the feelings of broken trust
The darkness forms around my vesile
Swallowing my mind, my heart, my brain
Exposing the truth of your fallen world
Will you ever trace my affection
Shadows following my secret thoughts
I slip away into your world of lies
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2004-04-21 03:54:33]
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Re: pleasurable vengance
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 04:32:06 AM AEST
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Haunting poem, very well written.
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Re: pleasurable vengance
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:19:30 AM AEST
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Well written spooky and haunting emotions very emotive write well done hun
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Re: pleasurable vengance
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:09:56 AM AEST
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Re: pleasurable vengance
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:07:38 PM AEST
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the sadness and perfection seeps out of every line I loved this.
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