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CArelessly Indiffrent
Contributed by
ICEYFLAMES
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 07:45:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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SOme thing was taken from me
I do not know
Everything fell apart
I donot know
I am jus a part of a whole
I do not know
Expectations of many
I do not know
It's my future
I do not know
It's my past
I can't remember
Copyright ©
ICEYFLAMES
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2004-04-21 19:45:01]
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Re: CArelessly Indiffrent
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by NirvanaLotus on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:52:47 PM AEST
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| this is a good write, you just need to put a little bit of grammar and structure work into it. but it is a wonderful write :) |
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Re: CArelessly Indiffrent
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:15:30 PM AEST
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| nice write. interesting. |
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