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Breathing My Last Breath
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:30:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everything you say
Never actually turns out that way
You tell me it'll be okay
But I can't live with this another day
You can't tell me how to feel
And if I didn't have to deal with you
Maybe I could start to heal
But this is how I feel today
I'll do what I have to
Whatever it takes just to make it through
My sanity rests on you
And if you're gone, what the hell do I do?
I'm not ready for tomorrow
I try to believe you but I just don't know
I can't see what you won't show
I'm living in the long ago's
Yesterday I cried
You loved all my pain away
Today I'm dying
And you're breathing my last breath
Tomorrow I'll fly
And you'll move on, I'm sure, I know it
What you say
It's not that way
Am I okay?
I can't live today
What can I do
To pull me through?
Can't depend on you
What do I do?
Don't tell me what I feel
I can't face tomorrow
This is who I am today
And I don't think I'll be okay
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2004-04-21 22:30:02]
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Re: Breathing My Last Breath
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:52:25 PM AEST
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| Wow! Great as always! Your talent blows me away! |
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Re: Breathing My Last Breath
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:14:34 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good I Love It !!!!!!!!!! :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: Breathing My Last Breath
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:16:05 PM AEST
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I feel your inner cry.... it moved me... words that express a inner being.. and its beautiful..lovely...
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Re: Breathing My Last Breath
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by lilmom101 on
Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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| alot of sad emotions i think it was good |
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