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Running out of time
Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:22:30 PM in AEST
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an eye with out the dot
one in plural three
eye tell u it's not just a thought
like the concept of free
where u stroll to be bought
yet converse about the not.....
EYE did NOT sale out
EYE did NOT give up
on all those dreams
EYE am NOT alone
nor did EYE pollute the streams.....
an eye with out the dot
one in rural stuck
leaving on the sides dreams that rot
in order to make that buck
to buy the stock
to pay for ur dreams to come true....
but then the day come to an end, and ur eye
is ready to close as u realize u sold ur
dreams for time and ur time for green
written by Dillon Rhei
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rhei76
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2004-04-21 23:22:30]
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Re: Running out of time
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:32:01 PM AEST
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Very good work and oh so true.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Running out of time
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by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:29:04 AM AEST
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| amazing.. |
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Re: Running out of time
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:16:12 AM AEST
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| yes yes yes yes yes........dreams for time and ur time for green.........wow....... |
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