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Circle the Rose
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:14:27 AM in AEST
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Born to be down
Growth hasn't never grown before now
Had to be down
Caught me just as I learned how
Crying all alone
Pathetic as you always were
Caught never
Always said before the surrender
You will never get it
Just as we've always known
You left me by myself
Cut from what my spirit would have grown
You never learn
From what we always knew
You broke the spirit
From what we always grew
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Re: Circle the Rose
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:25:04 AM AEST
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| Great write! Good job! |
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Re: Circle the Rose
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by Rylo on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:35:08 AM AEST
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| Great job Keep them coming |
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Re: Circle the Rose
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:35:38 AM AEST
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Sad but written well.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Circle the Rose
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:13:14 AM AEST
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beautiful but sad
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