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The Darkened One
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:19:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tell me what is your name
For I promise not to bring you any pain
I want to know your desires
And I just want to take your life a little higher
Look into my eyes
And tell me, do you see any lies
I am a child of the night
And I wish you may, wish you might
Become my mistress tonight
Now take my hand
As I promise to make your life grand
Let me sink my teeth into your neck
For youll make me feel like a new man
Feel the passion, feel the ecstasy, feel the burn
As I sink my teeth in deep
Now watch your soul, for it lifts high
Into a new darkened sky
Feel this wind, as it blows through your hair
Now follow me if you dare
I will teach you all the secrets
And the mysteries of the unknown
For there is much to be shown
Now I will watch, as you rip this guy apart
To bring another life into the dark
Drink his blood as it drips from his neck
To his chest
For this life is the best
Feeling like a fire inside
Feel that bloodlust rise
Sink your teeth in deep, and take all that you can
For this mortal will no longer be a man
He is now your son, accomplishment done
Now watch him rise, to be the darkened one
The prince of darkness he shall be
To roam this land, with you and I
Through all eternity
2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith
Copyright ©
Rylo
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2004-04-22 01:19:03]
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Re: The Darkened One
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:24:09 AM AEST
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amazing my words once again wont do this justice Im drawn into each word!
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Re: The Darkened One
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:09:29 PM AEST
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nice storytelling! superb writing style, i love it! ;0)
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Re: The Darkened One
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:05:56 PM AEST
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Another Good Dark Write Ron....
I Like It !!!!!!! Keep Em Coming :-)
You Simply Amaze Me With Your Dark Poetry.
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: The Darkened One
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 09:01:00 PM AEST
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| This is simply one amazing write. Great work. *S* Cynthia |
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