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angry and dying
Contributed by
piggy
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:42:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I feel a little selfish
Don't want to wait and see
I'm angry for the moment
And dying to be free
Told someone a secret, once
They promised not to tell
Said that I was weak and weary
All because I failed
Left a trail of broken dreams
And filled the holes with lies
My eyes keep running water
My mind keep asking why
But I don't have an answer
I hope one day you'll see
I'm angry for the moment
And dying to be free
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piggy
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2004-04-22 06:42:35]
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Re: angry and dying
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:51:53 AM AEST
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Don't we all want to be free? Good poem, with an edge.
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Re: angry and dying
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:41:27 PM AEST
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wait a while, the anger does subside in time... keen writing, i like it... ;0)
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Re: angry and dying
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:47:24 PM AEST
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very good poem. I liked the 3rd stanza the best and the imagery of filling holes with lies. Amazing.
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