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Whens't
Contributed by
ripshark
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:05:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Whenst fraught fatal bullet,
Lest be told unto the rest
Bequeath the beast till nigh submission
Let love roost pon mantled breast
Grasp firm my heart, hold high to blade
Plunge foul death, end the charade
Hear not my cries for mercy
Tears sear my eyes unto your curses
Blind in devotion, I die once more
Return to your little hell forever more
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2004-04-22 07:05:48]
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Re: Whens't
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:12:29 AM AEST
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Boredom can be fatal. Nice read.
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Hur |
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Re: Whens't
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:34:34 PM AEST
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i'd liek to think the thought of "well if you're bored than you're boring" but at times i know that not to be the case... good writing, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Whens't
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 10:23:27 PM AEST
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| i loved your description,haha. boredom or anger are one of the most used medians to write. this was excellent poetry. |
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Re: Whens't
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:28:52 AM AEST
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| okay. keep up the good work. |
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