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If You Only Knew
Contributed by
swiftsouljah
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:28:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If you only knew
What you had
And the love you denied
You would join me
Breakdown
And start to cry
And you would understand
The emotions I bring
Before you now
You would know
That you held
In your hand
The deepest love
A girl had ever seen
You would see that
It wouldve been
Any other girls dream
But you threw it away
Like you experience it everyday
A once in a lifetime chance
You didnt give it
A second glance
If youd open up your hand
You would see my heart
If youd look you would see
The depths of my soul
Even its inner most part
When will you realize
That you have such
Control over me
You could ask me for anything
The alter the ring
The honeymoon
Id make you my queen
Because of you
Im better
Im worse
Youre my blessing
My curse
Youre my healer
My pain
You're my storm
That rages within
The extent of my brain
You calm me
You drive me insane
You help me
You hurt me
You know me
You grow me
From a boy
Into a man
But I still
Dont understand
You deceived me
You leave me
I need you
Believe me
I care for you
I die for you
You cry for me
You lie to me
Deny me
Ill never forsake you
I thank you
I love you
I hate you
You use me
Abuse me
You always confuse me
I call you
I fall for you
You ignore me
You restore me
You break me
Complete me
I wish youd treat me
Like I need to be treated
I wish you knew
Youre the one thing
I couldn't do without
Youre the thing
I cherish beyond a shadow
Of a doubt
If you knew this
Then why did you
Turn away like this
If you only knew
What you held in your hand
You would realize
You claimed
The love of a man
Wayne Wende
Copyright ©
swiftsouljah
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2004-04-22 08:28:18]
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:34:40 AM AEST
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Woow, hurt and romantic. Good write!
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:05:56 AM AEST
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heartbreaking write. Your emotions are so detailed and your pain flows. It doesnt sound like this girl deserves you I know your love is true for her but I know you will find someone whos heart andlove runs as deeply as yours.
michelle |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:08:15 AM AEST
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My advice after reading this poem. Forget Her.
Look for the right one she is out there somewhere just waiting for you.
Bernard |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by Fairy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:45:26 AM AEST
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I really liked this one.. I'm sorry about all the distress though... a guy as sweet as you shouldn't have much trouble finding someone
with hopes for the best,
Jessica |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:55:11 AM AEST
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| this is amazing, so sad, so emotional, so painful. she is missing out. i hope that everything works out for you soon. you'll find the one shes searching for you somewhere. feel better soon. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: If You Only Knew
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 02:03:06 PM AEST
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| Wayne - Thanks for your note on "Thief"... I'm usually NOT concise myself - just been playing with different styles. "If You Only Knew" is terrific.... concise it shouldn't/needn't be! I really enjoyed this! Excellent write! |
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