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A Layman's Quest
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:16:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The layman lays himself to sleep
In dreams he rides on clouds that weep
Through the greenest forests by a bound and then a leap
Over mountains high and in oceans deep.
The laymans quest runs far and wide
The best and worst; they coincide
Winning epic battles of his pride
This walk hes taking is deep inside.
No words of wonder and no Wizards tales
If you trust it enough happiness always prevails
Storybooks and fairy tales land you here; a voice of sales
You sleep to dream your layman quest; on your coffin hammer the nails.
Death runs rampant and dangerous
Nightmares believed to be serious
In a daze, he speaks as if delirious
To fade away, the laymans quest ends mysterious.
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2004-04-22 13:16:00]
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Re: A Layman's Quest
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:19:43 PM AEST
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| i love this, great use of language and rhyme. brilliant write. i need to go see more of your stuff now. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: A Layman's Quest
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:29:55 PM AEST
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interesting little write, makes me wonder what relates back to what - being that it is the battle in your head... i like this! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: A Layman's Quest
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:35:44 PM AEST
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| a good read, the words show the emotion. |
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Re: A Layman's Quest
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by Tinkkerbelle on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 08:31:21 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. |
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